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As I was critiquing daphneys ad I realized that it might not even be an ad at all but just a picture from an event because there was no company logo or slogan. However she described it well and I offered a few question on what would help her write a longer paper. With ariels ad I also offered a few questions to aid him/her with the final draft. Neither person had a terrible post however they both could be thought at more and improved. I had Dr. X last semester and had to do this assignment so im not really a stranger to the topic. By critiquing other people’s writing I learned why it is important to have a rough draft.